There is some distracting object on the left edge that should be cropped. The picture is washed out probably from the time of day you shot it so you should rework the saturation, and levels.
This shot has a lot of noise in it which does not work for this shot. I do not see the need to bump up the ISO when it appears that it was a bright sunny day. Not sure what is happening on the left side of the shot also. 3
The composition includes so many distracting elements and the main subject (the phone) looks out of focus. I would suggest simplifying the shot to just the telephone and maybe a little space around it on one side or the other for an off-centered composition.
looks very much like a snapshot to me. Basic rule of composition - if it does not add to the picture, leave it out. - the entire background is distracting, and the thing on the left looks -almost like a car mirror-needs cropped out. Go in tighter next time, perhaps a different angle and the phone itself is about a stop underexposed.
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