I think color would have made this more. I remember those, my brother had them. But the b/w makes it look a little flat. Not sure what is going on with the slpurpee cup in the back ground.
please close the blinds next time. balance the background, so it's not bright and dark to the extreme. you need to increase the DOF, so the pole in the front is not this blurry. it's very distracting. b/w is not the right choice for this photo. you could use yellow light (tungsten) to show age.
LOL!! I remember this game. You mean they don't sell it anymore?!! Good take on the challenge. The background in the picture is a little busy. Don't much care for the drink cup behind the "fighters".
I remember that game! I think this could have been an excelent image - but... you really need more light on them and the items in the foreground, midground and background are very distracting. A solid bg and clean fg would make a much nicer image. Also, what's with the drink cup?