Pretty good idea.... should have put the "WIN!" on the same line with "1 desire..." so it reads: "1 desire.... TO WIN!" Would be much better. Should also make the ribbon a little bluer. Good job not over doing it with too many colors. A lot of text + a lot of colors isn't very good.
Nice balance. The double ribbon is interesting, but perhaps unnecessary. Fun thought, and I suppose it's probably true, but my one desire is not to Win, but to improve.