Critique Club
By Paige
Hi there.
You have a couple of strong shots that work well on their own, but as a story for this assigment they don't seem to work as well. Perhaps a shot of a man in a suit or a close-up of one of the buildings, to show a walking to work type of story.
I really like the composition and the coloring on the first image, the sky, grass, clouds and shadow work well together with the buildings.
The frame is lacking, it would have been a bit better to have a thin black line around each image to seperate the clouds from the border. It seems a bit thin to me too. Also there is more room on the left then on the right.
Overall nice images, you obviously have an eye for compositions, just work on the presentation and you've got a higher score. |
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