First things first... Her expression is wonderful! There are a few things that I feel take away from this shot in general. One is the foliage in the front and the second is the buildings. This is a nice capture and it evokes a great feeling of happiness. For me, there are no leading lines. There is nothing that draws your eye into any directions. My eye goes directly to the cute little girl and stops. Maybe one way that this set-up could have worked better would be to reposition yourself where the distractions are not so visible, and to have the girl position her body where SHE is the leading line, of course she would need to be directed to a certain point in the shot that is interesting to the eye also.
Overall, I like your picture. It has no flaws or technical no-no's. I hope that this critique was helpful.
line? nice pic though, just think the structure behind is not ideal for background to this otherwise excellent pic. Next time do this pic with a neutral background and see the diffs.
I love the pose, and it's a great motion capture, but I'm just not sure about the foliage. From this angle and with this amount of blur, it just looks like overgrown weeds. This would have been great if it had been a picket fence or something similar instead of the weeds.
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Nice sommer feeling here. The sticks infront of here are littel bit distracting and the background is not so great but the expression on here and the momment of capture is truly perfect.... i dont care to much about this frame but that´s a taste thing... 8
Although the vegetation forms lines, it really doesn't lead to the subject. My eyes were immediately drawn to the girl before I even noticed the vegetation.
LOVE the colors in this photo. I think it may have been even better if the foliage in the foreground was in focus as well, and the house in the bkg was not. Probably a hard shot to get though :)
I love the expression on her face, it makes me happy.
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