The lean to the right hurts. The oevrall greenish cast hurts a lot. Excessive foreground is adding nothing; it denatures the imapct of the main subject. The diagonal line is very powerful, but it's only marginally a leading line IMO. The post processing that gives a soft glow to the concrete is very nice.
This shot feels and looks unnatural to me. The slight white outlining along the bridge is a distraction. The blue sky has a bland look, as does the water. I do wish there was more reflection of the bridge on the water surface. That would be a nice line theme. 5