Kinda uncreative in your lines. I think shooting at more of an angle would have much more impact and help to hide some of the crap i the grass. Nice choice for b/w treatment. Gives it a feeling.
TC
You lead me half way through the picture to a bright sky with no texture. I think if there were maybe a monument/statue at the horizon, it would make this much stronger.
I wonder what this would have looked like if you had taken it from a viewpoint just a little higher? The line in the centre doesn't look to me to be as strong as it possibly could be.