I've always thought that if you have to put more than 5 words in your title, you're strecthing it. Nice idea. he water is great but the book needs to be clearer/crisper.
I hate the overly long and excrutiatingly descriptive title. The photo doesn't meet the challenge IMO. But it is such a good photo and it is so well executed and presented that I've been bumping it up since the challenge began. It is among my top pick. Thanks for submitting it.
your mini-novela title makes me think you don't trust me to understand your photo, or you don't trust your photo to communicate obsolete. Both fears are unfounded, I get it - it's a very nice photo, I really like the composition. Great work -
I'm befuddled here. Your photo is beautiful, yet you give it this long explanatory title which is distracting, at least for me. But, hey, I'm glad you have all the names in your computer. Good luck!!
Now, I would like to know what happened next :)
It's a vey interesting shot but I don't really know how to make a direct connection to this book and your little story. And I am trying to make the connection because you have told a story in the title.
Good job! This really appeals to me alot! The photo speaks for itself, and is composed very well. But that's okay too that it has such a long, explanatory title :) Good luck. 9