I know this is part of a playground structure but the photo doesnt tell me so, nor does it obscure what it is enough to make it intriguing. What is the leading line? the pole over the suspension bridge? what does it lead me to look at? the bolts holding it on? the hump that I know to be a tunnel slide but doesnt look like one? why? why do you want me to look at the tunnel? Also the sun is very high in the sky wich makes lighting very difficult, the yellows all seem overexposed.
The note of desperation in the title does not inspire confidence. The leading lines I find weak. Nothing bad about the pic it just doesn't do much for me
Not sure what is supposed to be a leading line here. A more interesting image may have been looking up the slide tube at a kid at the top getting ready to slide like superman. the colors are good.
try not to sell your self short, especially in the title :) you've got a lot of available lines in this structure...next time try to think more abstractly. from what i see available i would have liked to see something done with just the chains and that handrail. get close and focus tight so the distracting elements of the background are blurred.
The texture on the floor of this structure is very interesting and I feel would give the image more impact as the focal point. Right idea though with the hand rails.
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