I like a good tilt... it adds energy to a photo. But, IMO, this one tilted too far. And besides, the tilted crop is probably responsible for cutting off her feet.
I like the pose, the angle, the lighting on the model and the texture in the wall. The bright patch of grass above tends to draw my attention away from the model.
I think I recognize the beautiful model in this one - she's your wife (or soon to be), right? I really like the way you turned this shot on its edge and used an angled line as your horizontal. It also works very well with the stripes on her dress. The top of the wall and the grass seem a little blown out to me though (lighting is too bright), but otherwise I think this one's really cool. Her pose & expression are very intriguing. 8
wonderful clarity. the fill flash works for me. i'm not so sure about the composition. I would have at least saved her feet and lost the grass. not sure what to do in the current surroundings, maybe with her back on the other wall with a bent leg to mimic the triangle in the slope
i don't think this is working for me. the skew is distracting, and although i find the lines on her dress to be an interesting juxtaposition to the surrounding, i do wish the crop was straight on. 5
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