rose petals on red piece of paper
shot in RAW
post processing:
raw conversion, opened up in photoshop, adjusted curves and contrast a bit to make the petals stand out more than the paper, unsharp mask
i wanted the DOF to be as shallow as it is for some reason
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I like the idea of the shot. I see the comments are all over the place but I am in the camp that there is just a tad too much red.
Camera Work:
DOF is shallow but it is not too distracting. Lighting works and adds to the shot. The only thing that really bothers me at all is the end of the petals. I am not sure why, they just make me stop and see what they are.
Post-Processing:
I can not comment on your post-processing because you did not include it in the comment field. Including this information helps us see what you have done, and can help teach other users how to use post processing to improve their pictures.
My Opinion:
I like the shot, it shows a very romantic side and one that any girl would love see waiting for her someday.
You are a very talented and I think your abilities and passion for this art will take you far. Keep shooting and sharing and teach us old dogs some new tricks
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Technically i think the shot could have been executed a little better. I don't see the rose petals as a leading line though. I am more distracted by the DoF problems than I am led to your subject.
I actually really like the red on red. It really brings out the ring. Very unique idea of having the rose petals be your leading lines! Good use of dof as well.
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