I read some forums on this challenge that began with "please not tons of old film cameras and film!" I agree in part, but still this is very creatively lit. Only change I would make is to crop just a little less. It seems a little cut off and boxed in. Otherwise Nice!
could have been a much better photograph, coz you have got a nice subjec to shoot here. however, this photo isnt. the angle is wrong, the cropping is wrong, the lighting is too dark (to my personal liking). note the bottom of the photo, its distracting since only that part is visible where the other parts of the photo is cropped to not reveal any background.