*Critique Club*
FIRST IMPRESSION: Great choice of subject but the lighting is a bit harsh.
CHALLENGE: Meets the challenge.
COMPOSITION: I like the composition of all three shots, though as a triptych I would have personally preferred the closeup of the wheel as the center image. It would have been more balanced in terms of types of shots and lightness of the shot.
TECHNICAL: Though the exposure is good, the harsh midday light on these images leaves them seeming a bit washed-out and flat. Different light (weather conditions or even shooting earlier/later in the day) may have added visual interest to the images.
CONCLUSION: A good, promising subject that could be strengthened with a bit more attention to lighting.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in future challenges! |
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