Nice. It would probably look better though in portrait orientation and with the other girl looking at you. It looks like you could ask here to look at you. Judging by the other two kids, they all wanted to have their photo taken, so it would be a good opportunity. In portrait orientation, you could have also got rid of the cars on the right and the ugly, untreated grass on the left.
I would have taken this in portrait. The grass on the left and car on the right aren't really required in the photo. Try getting down lower for a different angle - it would also help in not cropping the girl at the back.
I think if you could have had the kids line up shortest to tallest, it would have really emphasized the converging lines of the grass and side walk. Another suggestion would be to get down on their level. Good shot.
Cute kids. The car in the upper right is distracting to me. Cropping this very close to the subjects in a vertical would have made me like it a lot better.
Popular head cut off, please get all of the taller girl. This might have been better suited to portrait 480x640, instead of landscapte 640x480. Photo 8 Creativity 6 People 9 total 7
I believe that a vertical crop on this photo would have helped with the pronunciation of the subject a little more. When I photograph children, I try to get down on their level and not photograph them at a downward angle :)
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