I think it would of looked better from a profile view if that would of been an option. Other than that, lighting is a little soft but I like the color. Good DOF!
I think this is fabulous. My only comment is that for people who don't know what this is, they might not get that all the little nails are metal and not plastic or something. Maybe adjusting color balance or hues.
my goal is to comment on every photo in this challenge..heres urs..good luck. another unique entry..pink dots on cheek is a slight distraction, desat of magenta would have fixed this. hope this helps