whilst I can understand your choice of a tight DoF, I think the focal length was slightly too short - the rightmost spoke goes out of focus almost straightaway. This isn't quite in keeping with having the hub and spokes as the main subject, with the rim as an incidental extra. Otherwise, this has good composition and lighting.
This would have been a much stronger entry if the DoF was deeper or the angle was different. It seems there is a lot of nice texture on the rim that is lost.
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