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I applaud the creativity of progressing from black and white to color, but I'm not sure if it's effective in this composition. The color is vital to the shot on the right, and makes it interesting. The middle shot ends up looking somewhat cheesy with the color fading in from left to right. And I do like the composition of the shot on the left (particularly the chain), but I think it woudl be greatly helped by the strong colors that make the right shot so effective. I think your changing perspection of coming closer and closer to the boat would offer enough of a progression of theme in this series, the change in color seems both unnecessary and harmful to the shot. Of course that's just my opinion. Good luck. 5 |