I really like the one on the right of the picture. The one on the left looks unnaturally posed. Her hands and her raised foot, as well as the slightly awkward positioning of her head and her shoulders. Additionally, she is smiling with her mouth closed. That is usually the most unnatural smile.
Her position places emphasis on her butt. It is a very nice butt I'm sure, but I'd imagine she'd rather have the emphasis on her. Let her relax, have her turn just a little more towards the cam and loosen up that smile a bit.
The setting is super. I wonder if you could clone or crop out the bottom of the circle at the top above the doorway. It is a bit distracting.
PS. the one on the right is gorgeous. |