CC: This has a good story going for it - a begining, middle and end that work effectively for the triptych theme. You've brought some humor into it with the last shot too which works well too.
Compositionally I think the first frame is maybe too late - with the subject walking out of the frame, it might have been more easily identifiable if you'd been to the front of the model, and captured the full sports club title. The second shot is great and the third is nicely composed too, particularly with the millar sign in the frame.
All of the shots seem a bit underexposed and/or a bit poorly lit though that's hard to control in these kinds of circumstances. A good entry. |
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