I assume by the title that the point of the picture is the fish. If that is so, a different angle that would draw more attention to the fish would be helpful. As it is, my eyes are drawn up and over with the little girl's pole, completely away from the fish.
Hmm, if it was framed with the little boy a bit further from the edge, this would be really nice. I love the graceful curve of the fishing rod, and the way the chlidren are standing. The surroundings are beautifully oriental and exotic at least to an Australian like me :).