This is a pretty good pic. The lighting and framing are very good. I like the way he looks like he's sitting for a portrait. The focus is off just ever so slightly though and I think that's most of whats wrong with this pic. The rest of it is good
focus seems to be soft. if this was cropped, i think it would have benefitted from having the extra space on the right, the direction he is looking, rather than the left.