Neat idea, but the overlap of the shadowed face and the actual face in the car make it difficult to discern what is happening. The kid with the keys looks like quite a character!
Good use of her reflection to "polarize" the window and let his face come through. I wish his face was just a little bit further to the right in the picture so we could see a little more of her face in the reflection. I was wondering about a much tighter crop, maybe to focus on his face, her face, her hand, and the door handle -- but I'm not sure if that would be enough to identify that they were in the car. Letting her drop her right hand would get rid of those fingertips on the far right edge.
Brat! (Just kidding) Maybe too much tint on the windows, or too much reflection. Kid inside barely visible. Good concept. Did she get the keys? Photo 6 Creativity 9 People 7 total 7
Interesting superimposition of faces, and I like how I can see the keys inside the car. Not so crazy about the little tiny fingertips on the right side though.
The kid in the car is very difficult to see -- maybe shoot at another time of day? Or use a polarizing filter? Or adjust the levels even. My other suggestion is a tighter crop to show their faces more, and deemphasize that rear-view mirror.
Now this is what I call creative including Dad's arm, hand & the keys reflected in the window. There isn't a kid in the world who hasn't pulled this little shennigan & the lighting on her face just picks up the hint of mischief.
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