This could work well as an abstract if there was a bit more drama, perhaps shooting at a different time of day to capture some shadows would bump up the contrast . I like the use of perspective.
Just didn't like the busyness of all the beams. I know that they take up a lot of area and you couldn't have taken much out of it. Maybe more of a closeup on one area? Don't really know.
I like this type of abstract shot. it's too bad you didn't submit at a larger size.
One thing I would have done differently is to make this a black and white image.
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