One of a few buildings being restored at what was once the RI Medical Center. The mentally ill were once incarcerated in these buildings; they will now be used as office space. Cropped, curves and adjusted brightness.
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This is a fitting subject and a good idea. The framing is putting me off just a little though. There seems to be an obvious 'tilt' present in the photo. It's hard to tell if the horizon in the distant background is actually level, but the structure itself, and especially the ledge in the foreground are tilted. This could be corrected with arbitrary rotation in ps. I'm also thinking that maybe if the ledge were actually cropped out, or maybe at least to the ledge itself, removing the 'rock wall' portion in the bottom of the frame it could make the shot stronger, as to me, it seems to just be a distraction to your main subject.
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