the broader picture is quite neat, but the focus on the bug is a little soft, making him hard to pick out (i wonder if you've gotten any comments from people not even seeing the critter).
I had to look really hard to find the little bugger and so wish you got in really close or zoomed in way more than you have. I"m not even sure you would helped, as the creature is the same color as the leaves behind it.
It is very hart to find the subject in this photo. If you could have placed him lower on the Flower so you can see the bug better (just kidding). Also the wilted flower is not very pleasing to look at. I don't understand your title. But maybe that just me.
OMG it took me a moment before I saw the insect lol I was confused for a second, wondering where the fauna was. Mabe a little more zoom on him would be helpful. You would still get the effect, but he would be easier to see, he is just so tiny. Good job :)