Ok...we have a girl, we have a flower, we have a sunset...who could resist? Very nice composition. The flower and skintones are a bit overlit from your flash.
The 2 subjects in this photo go really well together. I can see where you want to go with this. I like who the yellow flower complements the sun. I notice a problem I always have with dodging on the girl's lips and eyes. Rather than lighten the colour, its painted white onto it and taken away sound of the redness which is a shame.