I like the idea of this very much, like the abstract of it a lot. I would think the delicate parts, that of the painting between the spokes, be shown more than the abstract of the spokes or at least more of a balance between the two.
My son says this is purdy. :) Actually I like it too. Unique in the challenge. Can't think of anything to critque on, so I will give you an 8. The composition works for me, maybe a little more contrast. Good luck in the challenge!