Wow... there is so much not good here. I hate to be harsh...but the girl in the foreground is way too red... need color correction badly ..the focus is so off...if you were going for a soft effect ... you missed
Nice candid! I like the framing, though perhaps a little more of the left side could have been left in. I like that it's a little grainy, almost like a 70's vacation shot (has that Jaws-era feel to it). The people frolicking in the background is a great touch. I can't help but like it, even if granular matter isn't the focus of the shot.