pretty light on the left side of the face. To fill in that shadow on the other side, just hold oup something white. Maybe a pillow case or a poster board. You will be amazed at what it can do. By the way, the posing of the hand makes it look a little big, it is kinda distracting. Hands are very hard to photograph, nice try
Gorgeous eyes, I think her hand in the composition cramps the frame and detracts from her beauty- especially with this crop, as it makes the hand position look awkward. I love the light, just the right amount of detail.
This is a beautiful portrait and the lighting is just right. Still to me it does not fit the theme of the challenge. As in all photographs light is part of the image but I don't find that light itself is a subject in this image. I'm still giving it a 6 because I like it so much but would have given a higher rating if I felt it fit the challenge.
Nice work; I like that I can see the window in full in the reflections. Everything in the shot is sacrificed to those eyes, which is both a good and a bad thing: they're worth it, first, but also I feel your shot lacks some depth because of that single point of real interest.