I like the attempt at trying something different.. To be truthful though, the shot is actually below what I would call average.. But I'll give you a 6 for TRYING something different.. Good luck!
It's a pretty clear photo, I do see the problem here. While this is a fine photo, technically, I'm not quite up to "buying into" this stretch of the challenge topic. I will say this is a creative take (been there, done that). Color seems fine; cropping is your choice, no definitive subject; Focus (see cropping). 5 Rob the Swash
If I weren't so messy myself, I'd be quicker to judge! I doubt this image will score high, but I for one LOVE this idea and applaud you for being bravely creative! That said, I suppose this image could use just a little sharpening to get everything in focus. It doesn't look "composed," but things look so good in terms of placement, I wouldn't doubt you "fixed" a few things. Nice work.