Including the bright area at the top of the frame caused the camera to underexpose the foreground, so the area of interest is dark and lacks detail. This kind of shot would be really hard to do right. The see saws aren't very attractive or interesting. I guess from the title that you were going for someting moody here, but I find it more dull than anything else. Sorry.
i like the shapes and colors in this photo, but something seems off to me... not sure what it is - maybe the photo needs to be brighter? or maybe it's the focus?
This is an interesting photo and a good but 'differen't interpretation of this challenge. I'm not really sure how to crtique this photo. The subject matter isn't pulling me in and making me ask myself how it could be improved...