This is a little too much like an underexposed snapshot. The water doesn't provide enough contrast from the models. The sun needed to be lower in the sky. The steep shoreline also forced a downward shot that caused the horizon to be a too high. If you could've lowered the camera to put more sky behind the models, the silhouette would have been enhanced.
The sky area could be gone and it would enhance the image. More yellow for the sand, would make me beleive this image. Very cool though, the subdued details in the people are terrific.
should have cropped this shot, the guy on the left is very distracting....does not have a good pose, the gal on the right is a great pose. you could have cropped just the bottom right and gotten a solid two points higher and possibly been in shot for a ribbon