needs closer cropping (partly into the thumbs), more even lighting (left cheek, neck, and right fingers), and leveling (the pockets of open space pull the eyes away from the triange.) 5
I'm not thrilled by the composition here..the triangle gets lost with the introduction of the other fingers, and the mouth does not add much to the image for me.
Excellent take on the challenge! Some of the fingers and part of the face and neck of the subject are blown out though - the eyes go to the blown out parts first then are locked there.
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