This is a good reflection shot but I just don't get the feeling that I'm looking in ... the reflection reinforces that I'm looking in two directions but they're AT the building and BEHIND the camera. Neither seems to be in.
I think I would've liked the photo more if the building behind those windows was cropped more. The building distracts my eye from focusing on the great cloud shot off of the windows.
I suspect people might be marking this down because technically it's not a "look inside." I like this shot, and I feel it's entirely within the spirit. I reckon it's not easy to get the right tones for the reflection on the glass. I like the juxtapositioning between the square/rectangles of the high rise behind and the curves of the foreground elements. I think to achieve this shot, the lighting must have been well considered. The bottom I'd have cropped a little higher to block out that horizontal line of separation, and maybe I'd have played a bit with oversharpening to bring out more textures on the vertical columns. 7