If you had gotton the pyramids to be straight across the frame I would haven given you a very top score (so far) because I the emphasis you brought onto the shapes with the use of light and color. not overdone_just right
the white ball in the background is unnecessary and distracting. altogether, i think this would work much better if you take away everything but the pyramids, put some space below them as well (more balance) and just a solid background.
nice idea, composition needs work.