I like the crispness of this image. The game piece in the forground is distracting to me and out of focus, lose it. Shift the remaining composition so that the figure is at the lower rght third to draw the viewer's attention to the story you are telling.
I'm one of those that dislikes the forground subject to be out of focusand the background picture to be in focus. I think both figures should have been in focus. I think I understand why you did it though, the Jar Jar piece is passing go while the other piece is left behind. To make this a bit more effective it might have been better to choose a smaller piece for the foreground so that it doesn't detract from your subject and then maybe move the piece passing go closer to the line and maybe even crossing over the line. Another good idea would have been to get more of a view of where the character passing go was actually going by turning the camera more to the left.
Brilliant lighting. You can get away with showing such a small amount of the game because it is instantly recognised. Definitely the most artistic Monopoly contribution.