I'm afraid this just feels too much like a last-minute snapot to me. The background is distracting, as is the reflection of the window off the bottom right of the screen. The top of the phone has been cropped off, and the hand just feels too close.
I can see the idea, but for it to work (for me) the background needs to be un-noticed (ideally totally uniform, but at least without the patterned carpet!) and the camera needs to be pulled back to at least include the entire phone. |