If I could find a picture of the image that your title eludes to I might be better able to appreciate this photograph. Your model seems to be looking at something, but not intently or emotively enough for me to really be interested in what it might be. The jewelry and watch that she's wearing are somewhat distracting, and the strong light and her dark clothing make her look rather pale. A shallower DOF centered on the girl would have helped to direct my attention to her (as it is, I'm distracted by the odd shadow that makes it look like there's a face on the ground behind her head). Taking this photograph on a more overcast day would have helped to soften the light.
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