Critique CLub Comments by Grayce
You met the challenge (which I couldn't) in a creative way.
Your composition is very good, including two diagonals, and use of negative space.
Focus is fine, everything is clear. Nice use of texture. Color is so so. The sand's yellow looks a bit unnatural, but still acceptable.
The image is very slightly over-exposed. Not too bad though.
OVerall this is good.
Regards,
Nice photo. I like the lighting, the subtle tones of the sand and water, and the textures. The composition is really nice, the way the line of the number leads up to the arc of water.
Pi is represented. The sand is blown out in the top left and makes it overall real bright and hard on the eyes. The focus also appears a slight off, in that I can't make out alot of detail. Probably from the brightness. closing down the aperture may help.
I like this image...clear focus, interesting interaction between water and sand, great lighting. The presentation is a bit literal for me, but that's just me :).
Okay, there's pi, the first few numbers anyway. I'm not sure that the ocean "swallowing" the numbers says anything to me, but I like the composition of the numbers within the frame.
great idea for the challenge, and I'm sure the sea is going to wipe out your Pi very soon from the looks of it. good colour for now though, good focusing, the lighting is good considering it's outdoor beachy lighting and it's pretty BRIGHT stuff, kinda yellow though. . .
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