What a beautiful girl! I love her eyes, very expressive. The lighting on the left side of her face seems a little bit harsh as compared with her right side. The light on the right still shows all of the detail of her face without washing it out at all.
The bright side of her face looks a bit overexposed. And the material in the background would be less distracting with a shallower DOF (but that won't eliminate the door frame and the lamp from behind her head).
A little overexposed on the light side of the face. the house roof onthe lower left and the small dark thing behind her head are distracting.
but I understand catching a moment with the kids. My son and dog get anoyed some every time the camera comes out now! :)
Don't like the background. Skin tone looks NeatImaged and too plastic. Lighting is a little too harsh, highlights are too bright. Object growing out of head adds a snapshot feel. I like the catchlights in the eyes. Don't know what mood you're trying to portray.