I like the use of flesh tones throughout this image. The only thing I think that I'd change is to remove her bracelets; they seem to be the only thing in the picture that doesn't look organic. There are discolorations on your model's arms and legs which look like faded bruises. But because of the mood conveyed by the pose, this is probably an asset in this case.
feels like the scenerio of her sleeping with someone she has feelings for but the other person doesnt feel the same about her... and kind of throws her feelings around. Am I the only one who sees this? maybe, but i like it
No, sad is not the right word. I think perhaps shy and might be a better word. Well shot and tasteful. A little too monotone for my taste, but I think you intended that.
Nice collection of browns, but something about it feels too setup rather than pulling us in to a shot making us ask what has happened. The overblown highlights don't quite work for me, although it does almost look deliberate.
Wonderful tones and I really like the pose of your model but I'm not sure that cutting off her legs was the right thing to do. Looks like your lighting did not cover the entire image area and left a couple of dark spots in the upper corners. I'm sure the teddy bear has some symbolic meaning, but for me, it's inclusion in the photo makes the image less poignant and reduces it's impact.
evocative piece, with the pose and the color tones. sight vignet in upper right and left corners are very small flaws here. and were it not for the high contrasty wall, i'd give this a 10. but a 9 for an effort that I feel exceeded 95 percent of the shots entered in the challenge.
hmmmmmmm what to say about this image...I generally like it..tones nice, set up ok, angle of body a bit awkward (feet chopped off) and dark areas in the top right and left corners distracting 5
great idea...but there are a number of elements I'm not sure about...the bear, covers, toning. The pose and overall composition is great; not to mention the lighting effects. If desaturated/monochromed channel mixed really could be a high scorer
You're right sad is not the right word. if you really wanted to portray sadness try having her curl up in a ball lying down. Makes it seem like she's in the fetal position.
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