Impenetrable, I find this. Your distribution of focus seems perverse, and it lacks much sense of grace, photographically. That may well be absolutely as you intended ...
Ah, it took a moment to register. It's a belly-button! Please don't get offended, but the picture is just simply too blurry to work. I think the idea of a belly-button in a corner might work for minimalism though.
While it is indeed a minimalistic image, I feel it's not an interesting one. Besides, the main subject here -the belly button- is very soft, almost out of focus. The composition is, however, fine. Better luck next time.
The old belly button. Of course there are two ways to go here: one is dead focus on the subject (the button) with a wide aperture to soften the upper part of the body or go for the controversial soft focus. Personally, I would have gone for the sharp because the skin tonal values are flat lit, that is, no overbearing shadows to detract. But, hey, the concept is good and you get one bump from 5 to 6.
great idea, it is a shame that it is out of focus.
as a nude model myself, let meoffer a piece of advice - always have the model remove any articles of clothing that might cause red marks or unslightly lines at least an hour before shooting them, so the skin is smooth and unblemished for the camera.
This image is blurry and out of focus. The shadows around the subject call some attention to it, but in general there isn't anything to direct the eye.
Cute concept, with the folds of the skin breaking monotony for the background. This would have been an excellent image... but it's not sharp. Scoring it still a 7, though.
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