Author Thread
Post actions
Greetings from the Critique Club...
Comments Made During the Challenge
Post actions
I would like to see more detail in the diamond. 4
Post actions
What is the spike-looking thing holding the diamond in place? The DOF looks like it's the right width, but it's not centered on the diamond.
Post actions
Post actions
Its sort of hard to make out what the picture is of because of the focus
Post actions
Eye does not go towards the subject and the focus does not help the subject matter.
Post actions
interesting use of theme, whites not pure, blacks ok, nice dof, nice texture, nice comp,
Post actions
It seems as though the focus is more on the background as opposed to the subject, which takes away some of the subject's detail.
Post actions
is this an outtake from jewelry challenge? The idea is good, but needs a better focus on the subject
Post actions
I'm not sure what I'm looking at exactly, which makes things difficult.
Post actions
I would like to see the diamond more in focus here instead of the blur affect on the outside of it.
Post actions
huh? not getting this one, 1
Post actions
The diamond just isn't crisp enough for this composition to have the impact it deserves.
Post actions
Is this for the jewelery challenge or the tack challenge? But seriously, I guess by your title that its a diamond, but it is a little confusing what you are trying to portay. Technique, lighting and composition are good.
Post actions
Post actions
Seems like the focal point (diamond) isn't as in focus as the coal (imo).
Post actions
Reflections here are more harsh than pretty. This might have worked out better in color.
Post actions
Post actions
i like this picture personally i would have prefered the rocks to be a little sharper and not so much noise in the middle otherwise cool
Post actions
This is a nice idea. Personally I'd like it with a bit more contrast. The charcoal seems a bit too gray.
Post actions
diamond doesn't seem to be in focus. And the hole in the middle of the charcoal pieces is disconcerting. If feels like the diamond is going to fall and will be lost.
Post actions
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
Photographer found comment helpful.
