Author Thread
Comments Made During the Challenge
04/30/2005 03:04:58 PMPost actions
a more vivid background would have enhanced this photo since so many of the watches have clear features
04/30/2005 01:18:34 PMPost actions
nice collection of swatches, like the composition and copy placement as well. would have preferred a rich/darker bacground color.
04/29/2005 08:00:40 PMPost actions
The lighting here seems a little dull, perhaps a different colour background would help?
04/29/2005 06:45:48 PMPost actions
i think more of metals and rocks when i think of jewlery. not really plastic watches.
04/29/2005 02:28:17 PMPost actions
the DOF is a bit shallow an d could use a little snap. small er f-stop and more contrast would make this a better shot. I like it and gave (8) well done
04/29/2005 04:32:54 AMPost actions
nice pic but is does feel like it need a little more vibrance, an increase in contrast and a little brighter might do it
04/29/2005 12:22:32 AMPost actions
Definitely suited for a magazine, only problem is how blurry the watches look. Great layout!
04/28/2005 10:18:21 PMPost actions
Good framing and good color
04/28/2005 09:11:08 PMPost actions
Good composition and watches placement. Would have been better with all watches in sharp focus.
04/28/2005 03:18:43 PMPost actions
04/28/2005 02:32:26 PMPost actions
I like the playfulness, but feel the lack of sharp focus on the last watch is a distraction. 7
04/27/2005 09:21:42 PMPost actions
The swatch logo is pushing the limits set for the text, but I really like what you have done. 7.
04/27/2005 08:34:08 PMPost actions
I haven't seen swatches in YEARS! Thanks for the nostalgia. I like the composition and it definitely reminds me of the ads from the 80s.
04/27/2005 01:15:38 PMPost actions
i think your white balance is a bit off, thats my biggest issue.
04/26/2005 07:01:26 AMPost actions
Nice shot, would have liked it more if they were all in focus, some are a bit soft. Can well imagine it as a advert, so a good job!
04/25/2005 11:17:16 PMPost actions
Incredible composition! Too tight a crop on the left and the need for more contrast are the only holdbacks from being a great ad. Very nice.
04/25/2005 05:25:29 PMPost actions
focus seems a little soft great idea and ad
04/25/2005 03:25:47 PMPost actions
Good variety shown, great advertisement.
04/25/2005 10:00:44 AMPost actions
04/25/2005 09:47:07 AMPost actions
I have the second swatch from the top...cool! Really nice picture and proper text.
04/25/2005 09:31:04 AMPost actions
Great idea. Lighting is lacking something. Maybe it's the background - it looks grey, where white (try black maybe?) may have been a better choice. Good job.
04/25/2005 03:38:00 AMPost actions
I used to own one of these....great pic and suprisingly stirred old memories...thanks....
04/25/2005 02:11:33 AMPost actions
nicely done...tad blurry on bottom of watch closest to "swatch" logo
04/25/2005 02:08:25 AMPost actions
Hmmm - not sure if that logo addition (if it was added) is gonna fly with the editing rules. Ok shot otherwise. Could be brighter. Good luck.
04/25/2005 12:37:06 AMPost actions
04/25/2005 12:11:51 AMPost actions
I would hardly consider swatch to be a jewelry... but still a nice composition. A bit blend for the advertisement though. 6.