I really like the idea of this photo but I think there might be a bit too much or too little DOF for my taste. I think a picture of just the bug on the screen could be really cool. A picture like you have it with the background items also in good focus could be very nice also. The way it is now makes me feel a bit uneasy.
like the idea, and the perspective works well. but i feel that a clearer background (as in against a blue sky, uncluttered by houses and trees) would be more effective.
Meets challenge description, 7pts the screen is competing with the bug.
Meets definition of minimalism, 4pts the image does not speak clearly about one subject,
Technical 6pts
Artistic 5 pts all the interest of the image is on one side.