ok nice shot it works well just one thing ............ its a bit ratty if you know what I mean it just needs to be a bit more clean cut and then you would have really nailed it.
The harsh lighting detracts from what might have otherwise been a nice shot. Coming back to this place on an overcast day would have yielded much better results.
The white flowers are pretty much blown out due to the time of day the shot was taken. I bet if you took it in early morning or in the evening sunlight it would be much better. 5