A little bit of contrast could have helped this I think. The ripped sleeve is also a bit distracting because it is so dark compared to the rest of the picture.
Cool shot though.
I like the idea, but didn't like that the images were so far on top of each other. I think that by spreading them out in the frame just a bit, to be able to tell where one ends, and the other begins would have allowed me to understand it a bit better, and bring up my score quite a bit.
I think you had a very good idea, which failed to be well executed. Your image is a bit confusing, has too much noise and brightness. Maybe decreasing brightness and contrast would help improve you photo. Good luck.
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