A really stunning image. The subtle DOF works so well, i wish i was capable of taking such a striking image. Definately worthy of publication. 10 from me, i hope you do really well.
If the face were just a bit lighter this would be a great shot. Not being able to see the eyes is very distracting. Great focus. I might suggest cropping out the person on the left that is OOF. That would place the subject less centered and remove OOF distraction from the foreground.
I like this photo because of the girl only being in focus and looks in a different direction, have the feeling the others were blurred intentionally, it's ok I guess...7