i like the capture - but i agree maybe getting in closer and cropping off the right side may have made a little more impact according to your title ... the lighting also seems s little too hard along the side of the ducklings ... but then again - it is hard to control the sun ... maybe also playing with this in a tinted image instead of full color
lovely idea, but i think you need a bit more in the image to really get the point across. also, you might want to look at this as a bw--that brownish water is definitely not appealing.
Very clever photo, but unfortunately there seems to be just too much going on. My eye has a hard time finding the real subjet and spends alot of time bouncing around.
Looks to be an potential awesome shot but the fact is that half of the action is missing in the frame so too bad really, at least IMHO this is a failed shot as it needed to be a tad more on the wide end. On the plus side I like the colours and movement of the little ducklings but since this is framed so poorly I can“t give it more than a 5 but if the framing would have been better I would have potentially given it a 7 or even an 8.