Cute Kid, Nice capture of the expression - but the image as a whole looks a little washed out - a darker coloured headscarf and background combined with a bit more contrast would have solved that. 6.
Jasmine is beautiful. I think the almost white background on the left detracts from the shot a bit. I think a bit more of the head dress showing on that side to frame in her face, and a black or darker background would improve the shot. Also, a bit more light in the eyes to really make the catchlight and lashes sparkle. I also think a bit more space under her face would help it look less crowded in the frame. The skin tone and the choice of color for her are great. She looks almost golden. Wow what a thought, she would make an amazing art shot with gold body pant on her skin.
nice shot! the only thing is that it seems that the center of in-focus area is near the headscarf rather than the eyes, so the right eye appears a bit soft...
pretty picture and subject... I think I'd have liked this a little better if she had been in the exact same position, but her eyes had been looking towards the camera, but it's hard to know without seeing it
Looks good! :-) The image is just a little bit washed out, though. If you set her pupill or some other particularly dark area as the black spot, it should make the colors look even richer. Nicely done!